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A submission for Threadless. The green is supposed to be printed via Belt Print, and the text is supposed to be embroidered.
First edit: Changed the placement of the words to make it less visibly repetitive and remove implied lines. Second edit: Changed the placement of the text to the bottom left (of the shirt). Third edit: Added an extra instance of "nature" (in English) to the bottom of the shirt, close to the embroidered text, to make it more visible. Fourth edit: More languages, similar fonts for all words, and smaller halftones. Please give me critiques either on here or on Threadless! The more critiques, the better I can make it, and the better chance I have of getting it printed! Comments
 This kicks so much ass, Shed. Colour scheme rocks, fonts rock, halftone rocks (that's my favourite part).
 My only concern is the embroidered print. White is a perfect choice, but it's the placement that bothers me. To be honest, I would love the shirt as-is without that text. I don't know your intentions... but right now, I think it's cluttered where it is- it looks a little lost. I would like it easier to read. What about just above the bottom hem, left hand corner? Or going across to the back? Or on the back? Also, a question: will the print continue over the back of the shirt in this way? Or will it stop at the seams (plain brown back)? Thanks, Marissa. I played around with the placement and left it on the bottom corner.
The belt printing should cover both front and back of the shirt, thankfully. -- ~Shed Extremely selective when it comes to favorites. 98% of Deviants don't know the difference between "your" and "you're." If you're one of the 2% that wants to punch them, copy this into your signature. *applause* |
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The green text with brown background goes with the theme of "Nature" and I love how your using words from many different languages that mean "nature" on the tee, instead of just the English, or well known ones. It kind of makes me think of the MacDonald's cups that say "I'm lovin' it" in a bunch of different languages, except your use of it is more meaningful that advertising a corporation.
There are just a few things that I want to mention. I think that the text is wonderful, but each individual "square" of text is too separate from the ones around it. Now that you have them all placed, you should play around with them and integrate them a little more. As well, the similar words from each square match up in a horizontal and vertical line. They should be more random, so it's harder to find the same word anywhere else on the shirt.
Thats really all I can reccommend. I can't wait to see what it looks like when it's finished!
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